It is hard coming up with an intro paragraph. I believe I have found one that works. It introduces the topic a little and ask a question. I feel that the question will be the hook of the intro. My question asks the audience, who is right? With that it should get them to start thinking. Despite my confidence in my intro, it is still subject to change. I know as I write the essay I may want to add more to the intro. I may even want to replace the question. As it stands now, I am confident in it. It tells a little bit about the subject without giving away too much. Afterward it ends with a question, I think that's perfect.
Intro:
The Israeli-Palestinian
conflict is a war that has been going on since after WWII ended. Israel claims
that they own land that is inhabited by Palestine. Palestine claims that Israel
has no rights to the land. The results of these claims have been an ongoing
conflict between the two groups. During this conflict, Israel has maintained
the upper hand. Palestine has stayed strong despite this and has not backed
down. To this day, no end for this conflict is within sight. Who is right and
who is wrong?
No comments:
Post a Comment